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I could not stop reading this - it was so good! I love the different perspective on Ulfric and your tweaks on some of the quests; I think it all came together very well in your fanfic. Can't wait to see what you have in store. Hopefully, you have time to post another chapter soon!
Chapter five has been updated. These scenes were the most difficult for me to write, the last of which was the very first I had ever imagined of Annika and Ulfric, the scene that inspired this entire story. I've been waiting two years to write that, and I'm relieved, and a little nervous, that it's finally out there. I hope you guys enjoy it!
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Wow. Just...wow. I have so much to say about that last scene, but here I sit nearly speechless. The emotions of Ulfric and Annika were so well written, so raw, that it was like I was sitting right next to them, feeling their emotions, wanting to say words of comfort but wanting to sit and watch their interaction in the Great Hall as she gave her reasons and told her story. Simply put: It was perfect.
Three unnamed sources have told me to rate this one, so here 'tis.ORIGINALITY: 9/10CHARACTER DEPTH: 10/10STORY: 10/10LORE LEVEL: 7/10COMMENTS: Touching. The detail you put in are remarkable and they all add on to the memorable parts of the story. I especially enjoyed the emotions and feeling of the depth of each character. Keep writing on!
Three unnamed sources have told me to rate this one, so here 'tis.ORIGINALITY: 9/10CHARACTER DEPTH: 10/10STORY: 10/10LORE LEVEL: 7/10COMMENTS: Touching. The detail you put in are remarkable and they all add on to the memorable parts of the story. I especially enjoyed the emotions and feeling of the depth of each character. Keep writing on!
Love the rating system! No one's done anything like that before. Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
It's the servant dude, I can't remember his name.. Ulfric's servant, he is always lurking..
EDIT: Jorleif! that's the one..