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Good introduction R'alle, my only suggestion is that you work on making your writing flow a little better. I saw a lot of action, but not a lot of description between or during the actions. It was he did this, then this, then this, but that's okay because we all improve the more we write. It was nice how you added the brand but the two vampires chasing you on top of the couple was a little much I think for an introduction. That's just my opinion for future reference, don't go change it because it was good, I just wanted to let you know and I hope to see the connection between the branding and the vampires as your postings progress!
Same to you Arillious, there was a lot of actions but not very much flow between them. It was a good opening, I noticed a little back-story in there which is great. Just work on making your posts flow better in the future, and like I said to R'alle, everyone gets better the more they write. Great job to the both of you for integrating yourselves successfully. Hope to see more.
I will be moving along now since Val seems not to be getting on and even I can't get a hold of her.
I intend to take care of it in my post. As for Val, her mom has just been keeping her really busy, and I'm not sure what else is going on, but she shouldn't be any worse off than normal...
Since Val isn't on enough I broke myself away, as most of you know, and I wanted to ask if we were all agreed on meeting up at the inn that Arillious is?