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...is not Sjadbek, he just runs him.
Chapter 6 is coming soon! Like, tomorrow!
I approve of this. To motivate you, I have a secret reward that I won't reveal until the chapter's published. (And I don't mean my own chapter 3, either )
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Chapter 6 is coming soon! Like, tomorrow!
I approve of this. To motivate you, I have a secret reward that I won't reveal until the chapter's published. (And I don't mean my own chapter 3, either )
I quite like your characterization of Legate Rikke. It fits her character as I always envisioned it well.
Not bad...not bad at all. Despite my loathing for both Imperials and Stormcloaks, I find this chapter intriguing.
I finally got around to reading this. You've done a fantastic job! You play off the in-game characters so well, I can practically hear their voice in my head. Keep it up!
Thank you so much, Aeri! I've had a lot of fun with this story so far and I'm excited to continue it. One thing I always especially like to have fun with is indeed the character dialogue. This game has so many really vibrant and rich personas to work with, I just love it!
Yeah i have to say i'm really getting into this story, i found the characterization of Legate Rikke very on the ball with how i pictured her. Looking forward to you balancing the two questlines out.
I couldn't agree more. You're doing an amazing job with the dialogue as is. I'm especially amazed at the fact that you haven't taken an quotes from the actual characters.
Aww, thank you again! It's tempting to use in-game dialogue that's so readily available. But I wanted something of a fresh take. I'm sure hints of existing dialogue will pop up eventually, but I'm enjoying keeping it original.
Also, Sorex Vinius is clearly trying to flirt with Penelope. I think Brynjolf will be unhappy.
Fear the name Penelope? That honestly made me laugh.
Aww, everyone loves Bretons. They're just so adorable. (Possible exception: Belethor, but I personally find him amusing.)