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    Spoiler Knights of the Hist

    Hey I really like this back story. When you say after the events of Skyrim, do you mean like centuries or decades?
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    'Madmen' Of The Reach

    I love the visual I'm getting from this line:" and the night,allnight, would burn red as oxbloodand shimmer with fire, blood and passion." Epic plops brah.
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    Spoiler Rise to Fame

    Hey I really like your idea about not doing any other quests. It'll probably give a more soldier-centered story. Still as someone else said, I think you need to add more emotion and stuff to the character. Right now, he seems to be a blank slate.
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    The Price of Failure - The Story of Nox

    PS I'm also new and it would be awesome if you could take a look at mine as well. Thanks!!! My Name is Kvothe. You may have heard of me. | Skyrim Forums
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    The Price of Failure - The Story of Nox

    Hey I really liked your story bro. As Ragnar the Red said, you're a talented writer. I'm not exactly as accomplished as a writer so take my advice with a grain of salt. Maybe this was a conscious style choice, but it seems like all the NPCs dialogue is the same as it is in the game. You should...
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    My Name is Kvothe. You may have heard of me.

    Blood spurted from the wound like a red fountain and the woman gasped and fell in a crumpled heap. Kvothe turned quickly, ready to disappear into the crowd, when he heard a shout. "FUS-ROH-DAH!!!" Kvothe found himself flying through the air like a sock puppet. He hit the ground hard and lost...
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    My Name is Kvothe. You may have heard of me.

    Hey guys, sorry for the long, long, long absence. Life got really busy and I had to focus on that. Now I have some free time to update the story. So yeah, tell me what you think. ********************************************************************************* Chapter 2: Son of the...
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    My Name is Kvothe. You may have heard of me.

    Then they heard a scream. And another. And another. And another. Kvothe was dressed and on his feet before he could form a coherent thought. Lightning coursed through his fingertips and he raced towards the camp. Ma was the first person he found. There was a spike of ice in her chest...
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    My Name is Kvothe. You may have heard of me.

    WhAAAAT?!!?! You didn't like A Wise Man's Fear? Yeah the first chapters are boring but it gets sooooo much better, it's insane. I would even say that *gasp* I liked it more than The Name of the Wind!!!
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    My Name is Kvothe. You may have heard of me.

    Thanks!! I was wondering, should I move this to the General Discussion forum? i don't think I'm allowed to post this here. It's going to be a character journal soon once I'm out of the backstory
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    My Name is Kvothe. You may have heard of me.

    Btw I just read the guidelines and sorry this was the wrong place to post this. Can someone help me move it to the right forum(or tell me how) thanks!
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    My Name is Kvothe. You may have heard of me.

    Hey guys, I made a character based on Kvothe from Patrick Rothfuss' (fluffING BRILLIANT) series, The Name of the Wind and adapt the story to the lore of Tamriel. Backstory Since I'm playing on the 360, I won't be able to provide pictures. :sadface: Anywho, Kvothe was born in the city of...
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